Friday, 16 December 2016

Modified - Script

The improved script created by Megan and I :

Scene 1: House


(Kathleen aproaches house before entering the door)


(Kathleen changes into slippers)

(Tape falls through letterbox catching Kathleen's attention)
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 Scene 2:  Office

(Flashback of Mirrabelle entering Larreh's office before sitting)
 
  Mirabelle: I got your call.

   
  Larreh: Thanks gor coming here so quickly, I wasn't expecting you until
    tomorrow. 

  Mirabelle: Well, it's not like we could put this off any longer.

(Larreh slides tape across the table)

  Larreh: Here it is.

  Mirabelle: 42 North Street?

  Larreh: Of course *Pause* So, It's time  ...

(Mirabelle's eyes flick from the tape towards the camera, she graps tape and leans back on chair)

  Larreh: For the movement.
  
(Mirabelle exits office)

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 Scene 3:  Park

 (Mirabelle walks around various locations with tape)
 (Mirabelle approaches Geraldine who is sat on park bench)
 (Geraldine stands as Mirabelle gets closer, the pair stand together)

Mirrabelle: 42 North Street, she'll be there.

Geraldine: And my payment ?

 (Geraldine is handed tape and envelope)

Mirabelle: All 500 of it.


(Geraldine nods and leaves)

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Scene 4: House


(Kathleen picks up tape from doormat, walks upstairs and into bedroom)
(Kathleen sits on bed and opens drawer taking out walkman and headphones)
(Kathleen puts tape into walkman and presses play)

(Hand covers Kathleen's mouth pulling her away)

Kathleen: *Gasps*


Music and shots cut ... Titles Roll

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